Wednesday 13 July 2016

Jordan's Blotch Story (Maori Version)




Toku Veggiī Story E Horano.

Screenshot 2016-07-07 at 11.12.33.pngScreenshot 2016-07-07 at 11.11.21.png


Hot Dog ko te kuri wera nui e ngau tangata                                                                   
e ka porearea ia. He Cucumberman tawhito, me tehe wrinkly.

kia ngaro Hot Dog ko Cucumberman i he rawa te paru te repo swamp.The me reira he rota o te rakau mate e hongi rite te kope paru kino.


Whakaaro ratou e pā ana ki i ara ki te whai. I whiriwhiria e ratou tetahi huarahi, a aru ana i te huarahi. Rongo ratou te tangata i muri ia ratou. Tīmata ratou rere a ka pahekeheke te huarahi. Kihai i Hot Dog mataara te wahi i haere ia. Karanga ia rite hinga ia i roto i te paru.


I totohu Hot Dog i roto i hohoro karanga ia mo tokoni.

Cucumberman kokiritanga ka kawea te raau, a whakanohoia te roko iho i roto i te mua o Hot Dog.The paru i runga ki tona ringa rite Hot Dog i totohu. puritia ia ki ko taimaha te log.Hot Dog. Ara ake ia Kūkamo tangata ka whawhati Cucumberman tona tuara. Ko Hot Dog i roto i te paru, ka kawea Hot Dog Cucumberman ki haumaru i runga i haere tona back.They mō te rua haora noa ratou fare.

©  2016  

Sunday 10 July 2016

Jordan's Blotch Story (English Version)



My Veggie Story By Jordan.

Screenshot 2016-07-07 at 11.12.33.pngScreenshot 2016-07-07 at 11.11.21.png



Hot Dog is a giant Hot Dog who bites anyone who annoys him. Cucumberman is old and a wrinkly.

Hot Dog and Cucumberman get lost in the swamp.The swamp is very muddy and there are lots of dead trees that smell like a bad dirty diaper.

They thought about which trail to follow. They chose one trail and followed the trail. They heard someone behind them. They started running and the trail became slippery. Hot Dog didn’t watch where he was going. He screamed as he fell in the mud.

Hot Dog was sinking in quickly he screamed for help.

Cucumberman rushed and carried the log and placed the log down in front of Hot Dog.The mud was up to his arms as Hot Dog was sinking.He held onto the log.Hot Dog was heavy. Cucumber man lifted him up then Cucumberman broke his back. Hot Dog was out of the mud and Hot Dog carried Cucumberman on his back.They walked for two hours until they were home.

© 2016 Jordan